CAMBRI DGE EXAMI NATI ONS, CERTI FI CATES & DI PLOMAS FCE FI RST CERTI FI CATE I N ENGLI SH PAPER 2 SAMPLE PAPERS English as a Foreign Language PAPER 2 WRI TI NG SAMPLE PAPER Part 1 You must answer this question. 1 You are studying in Cambridge at present and two friends from your country are coming to visit you next month. During their visit they would especially like to spend a few days in Edinburgh and you are planning to go with them. A travel agency has given you the following information. Read it carefully. Then write a letter to your friends, giving them some information about the three different ways of travelling to Edinburgh. Suggest which you think is the best way and explain why. TRAIN Cambridge dep. Edinburgh arr. 07.00 12.15 07.56 13.38 09.00 14.12 Return fare: Ł90 (Friday and Saturday) " Edinburgh Ł75 (all other days) 30% off with a young person s rail card. " Cambridge " London COACH Cambridge to Edinburgh - 540 km Cambridge dep. Edinburgh arr. 11.00 22.05 CAR 18.08 06.35 22.30 12.25 Car hire: Ł40 a day plus petrol and Return fare: Ł60 (Friday and Saturday) Ł45 (all other days) 30% off with a young person s coach Write a letter of between 120 and 180 words in an appropriate style on the opposite page. Do not write any addresses. Page 2 Part 2 Write an answer to one of the Questions 2 5 in this part. Write your answer in 120 180 words in an appropriate style on the opposite page, putting the question number in the box. 2 You have just seen the following advertisement: INTERNATIONAL TV WEEKLY " What is your favourite programme on TV? " Why do you like it? We are looking for short articles answering these questions and we will publish some of the best articles next month. Write your article for the International TV Weekly magazine. 3 You have been asked to write a story for a student magazine beginning with these words: I wanted to give my best friend a surprise & Write your story. 4 You are going to start a short English course at a new language school. To help the school to put you in the most suitable class for you, you have been asked to write a report for the Director of Studies, describing what you find easy and what you find difficult about learning English. Write your report. 5 Background reading texts Answer one of the following two questions based on your reading of one of the five set books: A Passage to India - E M Forster Pygmalion - G B Shaw Rebecca - Daphne du Maurier Brave New World - Aldous Huxley Crime Never Pays - Oxford Bookworm Collection Your answer should contain enough detail to make it clear to someone who may not have read the book. Write the letter (a) or (b) as well as the number 5 in the question box, and the title of the book next to the box. Either (a) Which part of the book do you think is most important and why? Or (b) Write a short article for your college magazine about the character in the book which you would most like to meet and the questions which you would ask that Page 3 MARK SCHEMES & SAMPLE SCRI PTS WI TH EXAMI NER COMMENTS QUESTI ON 1 TASK-SPECIFIC MARK SCHEME Appropriacy of Register and Format Content Informal letter. Major points: Reference to forthcoming holiday. Information about the different ways of travelling to Edinburgh, with reference to cost and time/distance. Range Suggestion of best option and reason(s) why. Language of description, comparison and suggestion. Minor points: Any additional information. Vocabulary relating to travel. Organisation and Cohesion Target Reader Clear opening to letter. Cohesive devices may be used to Would have enough information on which to base an contrast the different ways of travelling. Suitable evaluation of the writer s suggestion. paragraphing. Appropriate ending. CANDI DATE A Dear my friends, I resived your letter and I m writing about go to Edinburgh with you next month. I went to a travel agency and got some information. If we go there by car, the cost will be Ł40 a day plus petrol and insurance. It s the cheapest. But we ll have to rent a car and will have to find parks ofen. If we go there by coach, the cost will be Ł45 unless we go there on friday or Saturday. But it ll take us about 10 hours. So shall we go there by train. The cost will be Ł75 unless we go there on friday or Saturday. It ll take us about five hours. We can spend most of the time in Edinburgh. I m going to get the tickets and am planning about what we do there. If you have questions or good idea, call or write me as soon as posibble. Otherwise see you next month. Look forward to seeing you. Love Louise EXAMI NER COMMENTS Appropriacy of Register and Format Content Friendly tone e.g. Otherwise see you next month. All major content points have been included, with a clear suggestion of best option; expressed very simply - So shall Range we go there by train. An adequate range of structure and vocabulary for the task with some good tense control e.g. The cost will be Ł75 Accuracy unless we go ... The errors do not obscure communication (apart from find Target Reader parks), though they occasionally distract the reader e.g. Dear my friends; If you have questions or good idea, call or write Would be adequately informed. me as soon as posibble. Band 3 Organisation and Cohesion The letter is well organised and gets straight into the task. Ideas are suitably paragraphed and an attempt has been made at appropriate opening and closing formulae. Page 4 CANDI DATE B Dear Christine, Thank you for your letter, which I got it yesterday. I was very surpraised that you and Juan are deceided to coma to visit me next month. You couldn t have chosen a better time because I ll have my hafe-term brake from school so I ll be able to spend whole week with you. I ve already made a few attempts to find out, the cheapest way to get to Edinburgh, as you said you wanted to see this place. In my opinion, the best way is to get a train from Cambridge to Edinburgh, because the juorney is quite long and tairing. However, this is not the cheapest one. Another way to get there is by coach but the time we ll be there is late evening or early morning and we ll have to travel for whole night and I know how you hate traveling by coach. There is another possibility to travel there, which is hiring a car, it is quite cheap and convinient but I can t drive here and so you because of right hand driving. I hope all the inforrmation which I provide here will help you to make the right deciedion. I can t wait to see you here, I m sure we ll have a grate time. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Love Julia EXAMI NER COMMENTS Content Appropriacy of Register and Format Good realisation of the task set, though the letter is over-long. A consistently friendly tone, appropriate to the purpose and audience, with direct personal reference. Accuracy Range There are several basic spelling errors e.g. surpraised; brake; tairing. Errors occur even when more complex language is Good range of structures e.g. you couldn t have chosen; ... not attempted e.g. which I got it; you and Juan are deceided. so I ll be able to spend; ... I know how you hate traveling. These keep it in Band 3. Target Reader Organisation and Cohesion Would have enough information on which to base an Paragraphs are not always clear, but good linking devices are evaluation. used e.g. Another way to get there; ... as you said you wanted ... Band 3 Page 5 QUESTI ON 2 TASK-SPECIFIC MARK SCHEME Content Appropriacy of Register and Format Description of favourite TV programme, including title of the Consistently semi formal or informal, possibly within a programme. Reasons for liking it. letter. Range Language of description and opinion. Expressions of Target Reader preference. Vocabulary relating to TV. Would learn something about the programme and understand why the writer likes it so much. Organisation and Cohesion Clear opening to the article, with early reference to the programme chosen. Suitable paragraphing. Conclusion. CANDI DATE C My favourite TV programme I write to give an opinion on one of the TV programmes. It s Cooking is fun directed by a well- known cook, Stiven Watson. It may not seem to be very interesting, but let me explain what a good this programme makes to people. Most of us doesn t like to cook and usually buys food which is almost ready to serve. And I was one of those before I switched on the TV once. Stiven teaches step by step, that cooking can be easy and what s more, pleasant. The recipes he gives are clearly understood, and all the pieces of the dish, you are going to make, are easy to buy. That puts you in a comfortable situation in which you feel that you are able to do it. Following the instructions, you can make a great supper or bake a delicious cake withouth too much difficulties. All you need is a good will. That s why I appreciate this programme, because it s not for the best, for those who already tasted cooking. It s for those who think that kitchen is the part of the house, where they don t need to come in, unless they want to have a drink. I give the highest mark to the producers and I hope they won t give up persuading that cooking is fun. EXAMI NER COMMENTS Content step by step , I hope they won t give up persuading... . Good realisation of the task, though the article is over-long. Organisation and Cohesion Reasonably clearly organised. Accuracy Patchy. The writing is awkward in places e.g. ...because it s not for the best, for those who already tasted cooking. Errors Appropriacy of Register and Format occur mainly when attempting more complex language e.g. Appropriate. Most of us doesn t like to cook and usually buys food... some poor punctuation e.g. ...of the dish, you are going to make... Target Reader Would have a clear idea of the programme. Range Band 4 Ambitious use of vocabulary and some structures e.g. Following the instructions, you can make a ... , Page 6 QUESTI ON 3 TASK-SPECIFIC MARK SCHEME Appropriacy of Register and Format Content Consistently informal or neutral. NB Written for a weekly Personal story that continues from the words given. Should magazine. include reference to a best friend and some sort of surprise. Target Reader Range Would be able to follow the storyline. Narrative. Past tenses. Relevant vocabulary. Organisation and Cohesion Could be minimally paragraphed, but clear progression in the story through linking devices and sequencing. CANDI DATE D I wanted to give my best friend a surprise to visit african Countries particarly french speaking countries Zaire and Senegal. When I gave last mounth a travel document to my best friend she was surprise, happy; She told me, your are kindly, since my childhood I wish to spend more time in Africa, it is the best surprise for me. I would like to visit a volcan and okopi animals in the natural park; says my friend. One week to ago, Josiana is name, told her parents, who were glad for Josiana s visit. When we fly to Zaire, Josiana meet another friends enthousiast, beautifull. and she decide to live in Zaire where she established a foundation for help the blind people. Josiana realise her dream. This story is true. EXAMI NER COMMENTS Content Organisation and Cohesion Ideas are inadequately organised and paragraphed. Linking The task is attempted but not adequately achieved. devices are rarely used. Accuracy Appropriacy of Register and Format Many basic errors, some of which may obscure Inconsistent. communication at times e.g. One week to ago, Josiana is name, told her parents, who were glad for Josiana s visit. Limited evidence of language control. Target Reader The message is not clearly communicated. Range Band 2 Limited structural range which is not adequate to cover the task. Vocabulary is reasonable in parts e.g. where she established a foundation ... Page 7 QUESTI ON 4 TASK-SPECIFIC MARK SCHEME Content Appropriacy of Register and Format Formal register. Report may begin in the form of a letter. Description of what is easy and what is difficult for the Sub-headings may be used. writer. Range Target Reader Would know enough about the writer to place them in a Language of description and opinion. Vocabulary relating to suitable class. learning a language. Organisation and Cohesion Clear opening to report. Suitable paragraphing. Concluding sentence. CANDI DATE E To Director of Studies. Dear Sir. My name is Anna. I came to London to improve my English language and I decided to take an English course at your school. I m writing this letter to help you put me in the most suitable class for me. I used to learn English at school in my country but it was only reading and writing including some old gramatical rules. I have found the most difficult for me English pronaunciation, phrasal verbs and some specifical constructions of sentences, probably idioms. My vocabulary is not good enough, I know just some of the basic, mostly using sounds. I need to renew my knowledge about English grammar as well. I realized some rules have changed or they are not using by English people nowadays. I hope I can find oportunity in your school to use English mainly speaking with another students. Your sincirely, Anna EXAMI NER COMMENTS Content Organisation and Cohesion Adequate with a clear opening and concluding sentence. The candidate has not described what is easy explicitly, but The closing formula is problematic - your sincirely. the difficulties are covered fully. Accuracy Appropriacy of Register and Format A number of basic errors e.g. another students; they are not It is a report within a letter format, which is acceptable. using by ... which don t impede communication. Target Reader Range Would know which class to put her in! This is a typical FCE answer - just satisfactory. There is an adequate range of structure and vocabulary. More ambitious Band 3 attempts appear clumsy e.g. I need to renew my knowledge about...; I have found the most difficult for me English pronaunciation. Page 8 CANDI DATE F To discribe my good points and weak points in learning English, I should like to mention on 5 skills of operating English. (1) Listening - In general, I am good at listening, but there is a weak point. I am not used to diarects or accents especially northern accents, because I am surrounded by RP speakers. (2) Pronounciation - I do not have such a big problem, but I would like to improve my skill by learning how to link words together and special rules. (3) Writing - As I do not have enough vacaburary, I sometimes face difficulties in writing, especially in formal styles. Essay writing is my weak point. (4) Reading - I have gained skills like scanning and skimming, but I still have difficulty in intensive reading. (5) Seminor Skills - This is the weakest skill of mine. I am not good at interrupting into other s discussion, but when it is in a small group, I feel more confidence. I like presentation using some visual aids like over head projectors. As a whole, I need to improve skills (3), (4) and (5) in the list above, so I would like to experience essay writing and diverts or discussions in your English course. EXAMI NER COMMENTS Content Organisation and Cohesion Well organised. The task has been realised. Accuracy Appropriacy of Register and Format The register is consistently appropriate. The candidate has Generally accurate but errors occur when attempting more employed an appropriate report format, which uses complex language e.g. I should like to mention on 5 skills of numbered points and topic headings effectively. operating English. Range Target Reader The report would have a positive effect on the reader, who Within the limits of the task set this is more than adequate would know exactly which class to place the writer in! e.g. I would like to improve my skill by learning how to... A range of relevant topic vocabulary has been used e.g. Band 4 accents; scanning and skimming; visual aids. Page 9 QUESTI ON 5A TASK-SPECIFIC MARK SCHEME Content Appropriacy of Register and Format Summary of the part of the book the writer thinks is most Neutral. Composition layout. important. Explanation why. Target Reader Range Would understand why the writer thinks the part of the book Language of summarising and explanation. chosen is most important. Organisation and Cohesion Linking of summary and explanation. CANDI DATE G Passage to India. By E.M. Forster The part of the book I think is most important is the description of the trial where Dr. Aziz was accused of having assaulted Miss Quested at the Marabar Caves. The fact took place during a visit to the caves that occured a few days after Miss Quested arrivd to India. She visited the caves with other British friends but entered in one cave all by herself. Finding herself alone she became very frightened and, after hearing strange noises, she became really frightened. So she thought that Dr. Aziz was near her, pushing her and trying to assault her. In panic, she run away and accused him of having assaulted her. It was during the trial that she realised she could be wrong and found herself in an awkward position: she was ashamed of having accused him without reason and, on the other hand, she was afraid of what might be the reaction of her British friends that had supported her kindly. I think she was realy brave in having admited her mistake and I admire her for having enough courage to admit her fault despite all prejudices she could have. EXAMI NER COMMENTS Content Organisation and Cohesion Well organised with a variety of linking devices e.g. ...the Summarises the part of the book the writer thinks is description of the trial where ...; Finding herself alone she ... important and the explanation required by the task is implicit in the final paragraph. Appropriacy of Register and Format Accuracy Consistently appropriate. Minimal errors only e.g. arrivd to India, entered in one cave, In panic, she run away, but generally the candidate shows Target Reader good control. Would understand why the writer thinks the part of the book chosen is most important. Range There is a wide range of structure and vocabulary e.g. ...was accused of having assaulted ...; ... and I admire her for Band 5 having enough courage to admit her fault despite ... Page 10