2
PAPER
WRITING
GENERAL DESCRIPTION STRUCTURE AND TASKS
Paper format The paper contains two parts.
PART 1
Timing 1 hour 30 minutes.
Task type QUESTION 1
and focus Writing a transactional letter (formal/informal).
No. of parts 2.
Format Candidates are required to deal with input
No. of questions Candidates are required to
material of up to 250 words. This may include
complete two tasks:
material taken from advertisements, extracts
a compulsory one in Part 1
from letters, emails, postcards, diaries, short
and one from a choice of
articles, etc.
four in Part 2.
No. of tasks One compulsory task.
and length 120 180 words.
Task types From the following:
letters, articles, reports,
compositions, stories.
PART 2
Each task has a given purpose
and a target reader.
Task type QUESTIONS 2 4
and focus Writing one of the following:
Answer format The questions are in a booklet
" an article
with lined pages for the
" a non-transactional letter
answers. The blank pages
" a report
at the back of the booklet
" a discursive composition
can be used for writing
" a short story.
notes or finishing answers,
QUESTION 5
if necessary.
Writing one of the following, based on reading
Marks Each question on this paper one from a prescribed list of five books:
carries equal marks. " an article
" an informal letter
" a report
" a composition.
Question 5 has two options.
Format A situationally-based writing task specified in no
more than 70 words.
No. of tasks Four tasks from which candidates choose one.
and length 120 180 words.
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the opportunity to add a piece of information, or make a
The two parts of the
suggestion or request of their own, and this enables them to
demonstrate their range of language.
Writing paper
PART 2
Each question on the Writing paper carries
equal marks.
Task format
Expected word length
The input for these five tasks is considerably less than in
Candidates are asked to write 120 180 words for each answer.
Part 1. Each writing task in Part 2 has a context, a purpose for
For answers that are below length, the examiner adjusts the
writing and a target reader specified in no more than 70
maximum mark and the mark given proportionately. For
words. Widely used abbreviations, such as N.B., e.g., etc., may
answers that are over-length, the examiner draws a line at the
also appear, as in Part 1. Attention to every element in the
approximate place where the correct length is reached and
rubric is essential for effective task achievement and
directs close assessment to what comes before this. However,
candidates should also consider carefully whether the task is
credit is given for relevant material appearing later.
to be written in an informal or neutral/formal tone.
Irrelevance
PART 2 QUESTIONS 2 4
The examiner s first priority is to give credit for the
This part consists of four questions from which candidates must
candidate s efforts at communication, but candidates are
choose one. One of the four questions offers two options based on the
penalised for inclusion of content irrelevant to the task set.
list of set books.
PART 1 COMPULSORY TASK
Sample questions and scripts: pages 19 and 24 26.
This part tests the candidates ability to write a transactional letter,
in response to a request for action or to initiate action.
Task type and focus
Sample question and scripts: pages 19 and 22 23.
The different task types are intended to provide frameworks
for the candidates so that they can put together and develop
their ideas on a topic with a purpose for writing and a target
Task type and focus
reader in mind.
The letter may be formal or informal. The range of functions
For example:
in this letter may include requesting and giving information,
A COMPOSITION is usually written for a teacher, perhaps as a
explaining, apologising, as well as making complaints,
follow-up to a class activity, and would probably include some
corrections, or suggestions. The usual conventions of letter
opinions and suggestions on the subject.
writing, specifically opening salutation, paragraphing and
AN ARTICLE is usually written for an English language
closing phrasing, are required but it is not necessary to include
magazine or newsletter. The reader is assumed to have similar
postal addresses. Candidates who do include addresses will
interests to the writer. The main purpose is to interest and
not be penalised.
engage the reader, so there should be some opinion or
comment. Candidates may include some description and
Task format
anecdote.
Candidates need to base their letter on input material of up to
A REPORT is usually written for a superior (a boss or a teacher)
250 words. This input is made up of varied combinations of
or a peer group (club members, colleagues). Candidates will be
text and notes, and may be supported by illustrations or
expected to give some factual information and make some
diagrams. The texts may include advertisements, extracts
suggestions or recommendations of their own. A report should
from letters, emails, postcards, diaries or short articles. Widely
be clearly organised and may include headings.
used abbreviations, such as N.B., e.g., etc., may also appear as
A LETTER OF APPLICATION is usually written to an individual or
part of the input. It is very important that candidates cover all
an organisation. The purpose is always clear (to get the job, the
the essential points of the input in their answer so that the
scholarship, etc.), and all information and expressions of
target reader is fully informed. Candidates should be aware
interest are directed to that end.
that the overall aim of the task is to achieve a positive effect
on the target reader. A list of questions or statements in
AN INFORMAL LETTER is written for a known reader, e.g. a pen
simple sentences is not enough; organisation and cohesion,
friend. The aim is to interest the reader, share an experience
clear layout, appropriate register, control and accuracy of
or explain feelings and personal opinions.
language are all-important features of task achievement.
A SHORT STORY is usually written for an English language
Some evidence of range of language is also required, which
magazine or anthology. The writer might be writing for a fee or
means building on key words from the input rather than
in the hope of winning a prize, but the immediate purpose is
lifting whole segments. Part 1 tasks often offer the candidates
to engage the interest of the reader.
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These indications of readership and purpose are not
The time allowed for the Writing paper (1 hour 30 minutes)
comprehensive, but are intended to provide some guidelines
is designed to be sufficient for candidates to make brief plans
to the different task types. It must be stressed that specialised
and then write their two answers as clearly as possible. They
writing skills are not expected of candidates at this level.
should not worry if they make mistakes but they should make
clear corrections so that the examiner can follow and mark
PART 2 QUESTIONS 5(A) AND (B)
what they have written.
Linking ideas effectively is also something your students
This consists of a choice of two tasks based on the list of set books,
will need guidance with. Using a variety of linking words is
as specified in the Examination Regulations issued every year (also
important, as is ensuring that the flow of ideas in the writing
available through the Cambridge ESOL website:
is logical and easy for the reader to follow.
www.CambridgeESOL.org/fce).
If candidates write simple sentences throughout, they
Sample questions and script: pages 19 and 27. cannot be given good marks for range of language. It is
important to use more complex language at this level and, if in
doing so they make mistakes, the examiner will always try to
Task type and focus
give credit for the complex language attempted as long as the
mistakes do not impede communication.
The tasks require one of the types of writing given above, i.e.
article, letter, composition or report. Counting words wastes time in an examination and can
lead to clumsy alterations to what a candidate has already
This option is intended to encourage extended reading as a
written. Your students will need practice in writing tasks at
basis for the enrichment of language study, and a variety of
this level within the word limit so that they know when they
simplified and original texts are included in the list of
have written enough in their own handwriting.
prescribed titles. Each book normally remains on the list for
Make sure your students have practice in answering the
two to three years.
questions without the use of dictionaries. Dictionaries are not
Candidates who base their answer on another book not on the
allowed in the FCE Writing paper.
list will receive Band 0. The questions are designed to be
Make your students aware of the importance of spelling
general enough to be applicable to any of the books. The target
and punctuation. Although spelling errors and faulty
reader is defined as someone who has probably not read the
punctuation are not specifically penalised they can sometimes
books. This encourages adequate reference to the text which
impede communication. If so, the overall impression mark
the candidate has read; a plot summary is not, however, a
may be adjusted. American usage and spelling are acceptable.
substitute for the task.
Each question on the Writing paper carries equal marks so
In Question 5, the examiners are looking for evidence that
your students should practise planning the time they spend
candidates have read and appreciated a set book and are able
on each question carefully.
to provide evidence of this in the form of description and
Remind your students that they can use the blank pages at
discussion. Assessment is based, as for the other Part 2 tasks,
the back of the question booklet to make notes, and that these
on control of language in the given context. It is obviously
notes will not be marked. They can also use these pages to
necessary to downgrade candidates who attempt the set book
finish their answers, if necessary. However, they should make
questions without preparation.
it clear that the writing is part of their answer and not just
notes.
It is important to write clearly so that the answers are easy
to read. However, it is not important if candidates write in
upper or lower case, or if their writing is joined up or not.
Preparation
By part
General
PART 1
Candidates write most effectively when they choose tasks
Successful answers to Part 1 questions include all the
and topics well suited to their interests and experiences. When
content points and expand them where appropriate with
preparing students for the examination, it is important to make
relevant ideas and information. It is a good idea to explore the
sure they are familiar with the paper and the range of task types
range of functions used in the notes to help your students
and topics so that they can identify those which are most
recognise how some require factual information tell Sam where
accessible to them.
to meet & say when & and some present opportunities for
Train your students to read the questions carefully,
expansion explain why & give opinion & . Brainstorm ideas for
underlining the most important parts. They then need to
expansion and encourage students to review their writing,
make a plan, referring closely to the question and looking for
substituting frequently used words with a wider range.
opportunities to develop their ideas and show their range of
language.
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Understanding the scenario in the question helps students Compositions
write letters in an appropriate tone. Sometimes Part 1 letters Advise your students that they are free to agree or disagree
are formal, sometimes informal, and it is worth considering with the statement in the task, or discuss both sides. They
this when dealing with the various functions in the notes. need to be taught to give opinions, and to agree and disagree
Apologising to a friend I m really sorry, you know how careless I in a formal or neutral register.
am! is different from a formal apology I must apologise for the
Short stories
noise which our group made and hope we did not disturb you too
It is important that students follow the instructions for this
much . In the examination, candidates are given credit for
task carefully. However, within the task, there is ample scope
consistent use of register in their answers.
for imagination. The use of interesting adjectives, adverbs and
Paragraphs make letters easier for the reader to follow. expressions should be encouraged. A firm grasp of the correct
Organising the content points (usually five) gives a natural use of past tenses is essential.
framework for the letter, but then students need to find
Letters
appropriate ways to link these points. Register plays a part
Students should know the formulaic expressions to begin
here, too. Your students may know formal linking words like
and end a formal letter, but should also develop their range of
furthermore and moreover but should also be able to use
persuasive language.
less formal ones like anyway and as well as that .
If students are required to produce an informal letter, they
Candidates can use key words from the question but
should use appropriately informal language throughout, and
should not lift whole segments of language. No credit is given
be prepared to express their opinions and give advice.
for language which has been obviously lifted from the
question. Reports
Students need to be taught report format, and to work on
Remind your students that the rubric always instructs the
specific vocabulary areas such as transport, leisure,
candidate to read the text and the notes you have made . It also
entertainment and so on. They should also be able to make
says write a letter using all your notes . The notes are reproduced
suggestions and recommendations.
close to or around the text or underneath it on a notepad.
Candidates must address each of these notes in their letter. Set book questions
Missing out a content point means the target reader is not The set book question exists to encourage reading and
fully informed and the task is not adequately achieved. This develop the range of language.
will result in candidates being penalised.
Don t miss the opportunity of integrating the reading of a
set book with language development. You can also discuss the
PART 2
characters and plot twists and turns, the surprises, and the
Part 2 will always have three different tasks, plus a choice
emotions experienced by the reader.
of two tasks on the set books in Question 5.
The tasks in Part 2 are a chance for your students to show
their range of language. Encourage them to be ambitious and
use a variety of grammatical structures and explore the use of
new vocabulary and expressions.
Since there is always a choice of task types in Part 2,
students should avoid a particular task type if it is unsuited to
their interests or experience.
Remind your students that it is important that they
understand what they have to write.
Each word in the rubric is important to the task, so an
answer may not be wholly relevant if the candidate is unsure
about some aspect of the rubric. Students should therefore be
advised to avoid a question if they are unsure of what is
required.
Articles
A successful article interests and engages the reader, often
with description and anecdote. A personal angle usually works
well, and a catchy title will attract attention. The use of direct
and indirect questions also adds colour, and students should
be taught how to use these.
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Part 1 Part 2
You must answer this question. Write an answer to one of the questions 2 - 5 in this part. Write your answer in 120 - 180 words in an
appropriate style on the opposite page. Put the question number in the box at the top of page 5.
2 The school where you learn English has decided to buy some videos in English. You have been
1 You have decided to do the same summer job that you did last year. You want to persuade your
asked to write a report for the Principal, suggesting what kinds of videos the school should buy. In
English-speaking friend, Jan, to do the job as well.
your report, you should also explain why students at the school will enjoy these videos.
Read the advertisement for the job and also read your notes. Then, using all your notes, write your
Write your report.
letter persuading Jan to join you.
3 You have seen this advertisement in The Traveller magazine and have decided to apply.
HELP NEEDED THIS SUMMER
THE TRIP OF A LIFETIME
E
P
F
A
Every summer we run an International
Camp for 8 to 12-year-old children.
WE ARE LOOKING FOR EIGHT PEOPLE FROM DIFFERENT COUNTRIES TO
Beautiful
SPEND THREE MONTHS ON A SAILING TRIP AROUND THE WORLD,
Explain why
place &
You will help with:
FREE OF CHARGE. NO SAILING EXPERIENCE IS NEEDED. TRAINING
the work was
WILL BE GIVEN.
outdoor activities fun last year!
entertainment
WRITE AND TELL US WHY YOU ARE THE PERSON WE ARE LOOKING
sports competitions
FOR AND EXPLAIN HOW YOU WOULD BENEFIT FROM THIS EXPERIENCE.
children s games
APPLY TO OCEAN WORLD NOW!
Free accommodation
Tents!
Free food
Not
Write your letter of application. Do not write any postal addresses.
Only 5 hours work a day!
wonderful,
Enough free
but &
time for us
4 You have had a class discussion on food and eating habits. Your teacher has now asked you to
to &
write a composition giving your opinion on the following statement.
Write a letter of between 120 and 180 words in an appropriate style on the opposite page.
Young people are eating a less healthy diet nowadays than their grandparents did.
Do not write any postal addresses.
Write your composition.
5 Answer one of the following two questions based on your reading of one of these set books. Write
the letter (a) or (b) as well as the number 5 in the question box, and the title of the book next to the
box. Your answer must be about one of the books below.
Best Detective Stories of Agatha Christie Longman Fiction
A Tale of Two Cities Charles Dickens
Animal Farm George Orwell
Wuthering Heights Emily Brontë
More Tales from Shakespeare Charles and Mary Lamb
Either (a) Your college magazine is looking for articles on the qualities of good stories. Write
an article, briefly describing the beginning of the book or one of the short stories
you have read, and explaining why this beginning made you want to read the rest of
the story.
Or (b) In your opinion, which character changes most in the book or one of the short
stories you have read? Write a composition, explaining your views.
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FCE
Assessment
General marking scale
Candidates answers are assessed with reference to two mark
schemes: one based on the examiner s overall impression (the
General Impression Mark Scheme), the other on the
requirements of the particular task (the Task Specific Mark
BAND For a band 5 to be awarded, the candidate s writing fully
Scheme). The General Impression Mark Scheme summarises
achieves the desired effect on the target reader. All the content
5
the content, organisation and cohesion, range of structures
points required in the task are included* and expanded
and vocabulary, register and format, and target reader
appropriately. Ideas are organised effectively, with the use of a
indicated in the task. The Task Specific Mark Scheme focuses
variety of linking devices and a wide range of structure and
on criteria specific to each particular task. vocabulary. The language is well developed, and any errors that
do occur are minimal and perhaps due to ambitious attempts at
Examples of candidate responses, together with the Task
more complex language. Register and format which is
Specific Mark Schemes, can be found on pages 22 27.
consistently appropriate to the purpose of the task and the
audience is used.
Candidates are penalised for dealing inadequately with the
requirements of the Task Specific Mark Scheme. The accuracy
BAND For a band 4 to be awarded, the candidate s writing achieves
the desired effect on the target reader. All the content points
of language, including spelling and punctuation, is assessed
4
required in the task are included*. Ideas are clearly organised,
on the general impression scale for all tasks.
with the use of suitable linking devices and a good range of
structure and vocabulary. Generally, the language is accurate,
Marking
and any errors that do occur are mainly due to attempts at more
complex language. Register and format which is, on the whole,
The panel of examiners is divided into small teams,
appropriate to the purpose of the task and the audience is used.
each with a very experienced examiner as Team Leader.
A Principal Examiner guides and monitors the marking
BAND For a band 3 to be awarded, the candidate s writing, on the
process, beginning with a meeting of the Principal Examiner
whole, achieves the desired effect on the target reader. All the
3
content points required in the task are included*. Ideas are
for the paper and the Team Leaders. This is held immediately
organised adequately, with the use of simple linking devices
after the examination and begins the process of establishing a
and an adequate range of structure and vocabulary. A number of
common standard of assessment by the selection and marking
errors may be present, but they do not impede communication.
of sample scripts for all the questions in Paper 2. These are
A reasonable, if not always successful, attempt is made at
chosen to demonstrate the range of responses and different
register and format which is appropriate to the purpose of the
levels of competence, and a Task Specific Mark Scheme is task and the audience.
finalised for each individual task on the paper. Examiners
BAND For a band 2 to be awarded, the candidate s writing does not
discuss these task specific and general mark schemes and
clearly communicate the message to the target reader. Some
2
refer to them regularly while they are working.
content points required in the task are inadequately covered or
omitted, and/or there is some irrelevant material. Ideas are
During marking, each examiner is apportioned scripts chosen
inadequately organised, linking devices are rarely used, and the
on a random basis from the whole entry in order to ensure
range of structure and vocabulary is limited. Errors distract the
there is no concentration of good or weak scripts or of one
reader and may obscure communication at times. Attempts at
large centre from one country in the allocation of any one
appropriate register and format are unsuccessful or inconsistent.
examiner. A rigorous process of co-ordination and checking is
BAND For a band 1 to be awarded, the candidate s writing has a very
carried out before, during and after the marking process.
negative effect on the target reader. There is notable omission of
1
The FCE General Impression Mark Scheme is interpreted at content points and/or considerable irrelevance, possibly due to
misinterpretation of the task. There is a lack of organisation or
Council of Europe level B2.
linking devices, and there is little evidence of language control.
A summary of the General Impression Mark Scheme is given The range of structure and vocabulary is narrow and frequent
errors obscure communication. There is little or no awareness of
below. Trained examiners, who are co-ordinated prior to each
appropriate register and format.
examination session, work with a more detailed version,
which is subject to updating.
BAND For a band o to be awarded, there is either too little language for
assessment (fewer than 50 words) or the candidate s writing is
0
totally irrelevant or totally illegible.
* Candidates who do not address all the content points will be
penalised for dealing inadequately with the requirements of
the task.
Candidates who fully satisfy the Band 3 descriptor will
demonstrate an adequate performance in writing at FCE level.
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Cambridge ESOL
LEVEL MASTERY
Common Scale for Writing
c2 CERTIFICATE OF PROFICIENCY IN ENGLISH:
Fully operational command of the written language
The Cambridge ESOL Common Scale for Writing has been
" Can write on a very wide range of topics.
developed to allow users to:
" Is able to engage the reader by effectively exploiting stylistic
devices such as sentence length, variety and appropriacy of
" interpret levels of performance in the Cambridge tests
vocabulary, word order, idiom and humour.
from beginner to advanced " Can write with only very rare inaccuracies of grammar or
vocabulary.
" identify typical performance qualities at particular levels
" Is able to write at length organising ideas effectively.
" locate performance in one examination against
performance in another.
LEVEL EFFECTIVE OPERATIONAL PROFICIENCY
c1 CERTIFICATE IN ADVANCED ENGLISH:
The Common Scale is designed to be useful to test candidates Good operational command of the written language
" Can write on most topics.
and other test users (e.g. admissions officers or employers).
" Is able to engage the reader by using stylistic devices such as
The description at each level of the Common Scale is not
sentence length, variety and appropriacy of vocabulary,
intended as a specification for the test content, but rather
word order, idiom and humour though not always
aims to provide a brief, general description of the nature of
appropriately.
written language ability at a particular level in real-world
" Can communicate effectively with only occasional inaccuracies
contexts. In this way the wording offers an easily of grammar and vocabulary.
" Is able to construct extended stretches of discourse using
understandable description of performance which can be
accurate and mainly appropriate complex language which is
used, for example, in specifying requirements to language
organisationally sound.
trainers, formulating job descriptions and specifying language
requirements for new posts.
LEVEL VANTAGE
b2 FIRST CERTIFICATE IN ENGLISH:
Generally effective command of the written language
" Can write on familiar topics.
" Shows some ability to use stylistic devices such as variety
and appropriacy of vocabulary and idiom though not always
appropriately.
" Can communicate clearly using extended stretches of
discourse and some complex language despite some
inaccuracies of grammar and vocabulary.
" Can organise extended writing which is generally coherent.
LEVEL THRESHOLD
b1 PRELIMINARY ENGLISH TEST:
Limited but effective command of the written language
" Can write on most familiar and predictable topics.
" Can communicate clearly using longer stretches of discourse
and simple language despite relatively frequent inaccuracies
of grammar or vocabulary.
" Can organise writing to a limited extent.
LEVEL WAYSTAGE
a2 KEY ENGLISH TEST:
Basic command of the written language
" Can write short basic messages on very familiar or highly
predictable topics possibly using rehearsed or fixed
expressions.
" May find it difficult to communicate the message because of
frequent inaccuracies of grammar or vocabulary.
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Question 1 (sample script)
Mark scheme and sample script with examiner comments
QUESTION 1: CANDIDATE A
Content Organisation and cohesion Range
Major points: " Letter format, with early reference " Language appropriate for expressing
Letter must include all the points in to why the person is writing. appreciation, explaining,
the notes. commenting and giving information.
" Clear organisation of points.
" Express appreciation of the place
" Suitable opening and closing
Target reader
where the camp is held.
formulae.
" Would be informed.
" Explain that/why the work is/was
fun the previous year (could be Appropriacy of register &
implicit). format
" Mention accommodation in tents. " Informal letter.
" Comment on food.
" Explain that there was enough free
time.
Candidate A Examiner comments
09th March 2002
Dear John,
How are you? I hope everything is going well with you. Do you
Content
remember when you phoned me last time, you told me you needed a job for
All points included with some attempt at
this summer. I ve seen a advertisement in today s newspaper which is about
expansion.
an International summer camp and it s about for 8 to 12 year old children
that I joined last year. Accuracy
A number of errors, e.g. spelling, tenses and
I know at the beginning of that you can think it s not convinient for
word order, but communication is not
you, but don t make your decision without hearing about it and what it looks
impeded.
like. Let me tell you about this job.
First of all it s located in beautiful place in amongs trees, just think
Range
that wonderful nature, brillant wheather and sunshine. It s stunning place. I
An adequate range of structure and
had a great time in that camp last summer. We had a lot of fun during vocabulary.
working hours. Especially outdoor activities, entertaintment, sports
Organisation and cohesion
competitions and children s game are perfect, great and fascinating. We are
Adequate with some use of cohesive devices.
staying in tents during summer. Have you ever tried it before? It s really
Appropriacy of register & format
different from our houses We have also enough free time for us to go
Appropriate friendly tone.
swimming, fishing, walking on paths and doing nature sports. We are not
working at wekends. I can say that foods are not wonderful but We can go to Target reader
town or we can cook our foods in camp kitchen what we want. Would be informed.
At a result of that if you decide to do this job, please let me know as
Marks awarded
soon as possible. Because we have short time for applying this job.
Band 3.
I m looking forward to hearing from you soon
My best wishes,
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Question 1 (sample script)
Mark scheme and sample script with examiner comments
QUESTION 1: CANDIDATE B
Content Organisation and cohesion Range
Major points: " Letter format, with early reference " Language appropriate for expressing
Letter must include all the points in to why the person is writing. appreciation, explaining,
the notes. commenting and giving information.
" Clear organisation of points.
" Express appreciation of the place
" Suitable opening and closing
Target reader
where the camp is held.
formulae.
" Would be informed.
" Explain that/why the work is/was
fun the previous year (could be Appropriacy of register &
implicit). format
" Mention accommodation in tents. " Informal letter.
" Comment on food.
" Explain that there was enough
free time.
Candidate B Examiner comments
Dear Jan,
I have already told you about the job I did last summer in the International
Content
Camp for children, do you remember? And this year they are looking for people
All points covered with some good
for the same job so I have thought about you. Why don t we do it together?
expansion.
You will work with children between 8 and 12 and will help with the
Accuracy
organisation of games, sports competitions and outdoor activities. The camp
Mostly good control of language. Slight
is situated in a wood, close to a river. It is such a beautiful place! Everybody
awkwardness in places.
sleeps in tents, it is very exciting. And when the children are sleeping, we have
the whole night free to go out and have fun with the staff.
Range
It is a good balance between work and entertainment. We have only 5 hours
Good range of structure and vocabulary for
work a day so it gives us enough free time to visit the area and do some the task.
sport activities on our own.
Organisation and cohesion
As well as the accommodation, the food is free. It is not wonderful, but it is
Good. Well-developed letter.
not the most important. The contact with children, the feeling of freedom, the
Appropriacy of register & format
sense of responsibility and the life in the nature make from this camp an
Appropriate.
unforgivable experience.
Let me know as soon as possible if you are interested in it, but don t hesitate Target reader
too much, it is worth! Would be well informed.
Marks awarded
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon
Band 4.
Love,
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Question 2 (sample script)
Mark scheme and sample script with examiner comments
QUESTION 2: CANDIDATE C
Content Appropriacy of register & Target reader
format
" Report should give factual " Would be informed about what
information about what kinds of " Register could range from neutral videos might be useful/interesting
videos the school should buy and to formal, but must be consistent for students in the school.
should explain why students would throughout.
enjoy those videos.
" Formal layout not essential.
Organisation and cohesion
Range
" Report should be clearly organised.
" Language appropriate to giving
" Sub-headings an advantage. information and explaining.
" Introduction and final conclusion. " Vocabulary relating to final
conclusion.
Candidate C Examiner comments
Dear, Principal
Content
I am writing about videos which our school going to buy the near future. Adequate.
Accuracy
I have some idea about videos. I think we should buy some historical films
A number of errors (some repeated), but they
because if we buy historical films we will study a lot of history about all over
do not impede communication.
the world also we will learn English. However, it will be quite difficult to
Range
understand because even if we watch such a kind of film in own language some
Limited.
times we can not understand clearly. Therefore it is better to buy several
Organisation and cohesion
kinds of videos.
Adequate.
For example, commedy and drama films. It is also not very easy to
Appropriacy of register & format
understand but almost every students are interested in such a kind of films,
Letter format acceptable, as there is a report
so we can enjoy watching films and studying English. I think when we study
embedded in a semi-formal letter.
something of course we have to be serious although we need some fun. If we
Target reader
can enjoy studying we will keep our concentrate on study something for long
Would have a clear idea about which videos
time. It is a good thing for every students.
to buy and why.
Marks awarded
Please think about my oppinion.
Band 3.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Sincerely
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PAPER 2: WRITING
Question 3 (sample script)
Mark scheme and sample script with examiner comments
QUESTION 3: CANDIDATE D
Content Appropriacy of register & Target reader
format
" Letter should explain why the " Would have enough information to
writer is a suitable person for the " Formal letter. be able to assess the writer s
trip and how the writer would suitability for the trip.
benefit from the trip. Range
" Language appropriate for giving
Organisation and cohesion
information, explanation and
" Clear presentation and organisation personal description.
in the letter.
" Suitable opening and closing
formulae.
Candidate D Examiner comments
Dear Sir or Madoms,
Content
I saw your advertisement in newspaper I am very interested in your
Minimal information, e.g. no information
advirtisement as spend three months on a sailing trip around the world.
about what kind of person the applicant is.
Accuracy
I m 22 year old of ages. I had a job as tourist and have the qualification of
Poor. Frequent errors, some of which obscure
First certificate.
meaning.
Range
I would like to have experience of meeting different countries people
Narrow some repetition.
It is good way to learn other langage.
I can talk other countries people in English.
Organisation and cohesion
Poorly laid out, little cohesion.
If I accepted to join, It would be nice for my future.
Appropriacy of register & format
Because I would like to go university in England next year.
Adequate.
Target reader
Please Do not hesitate to contact with me if there is any information if you
Would have negative impression of the
want to know.
applicant.
I can attend an interview in the any time if It is convinient to you.
Marks awarded
Band 1.
Yours, faithfully
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Question 4 (sample script)
Mark scheme and sample script with examiner comments
QUESTION 4: CANDIDATE E
Content Appropriacy of register & Target reader
format
" Composition could agree or " Would be able to understand the
disagree with the proposition, or " Neutral composition. writer s point of view.
discuss both sides of the argument.
Range
Organisation and cohesion
" Language of opinion and
" Clear development of viewpoint information.
with appropriate paragraphing and
" Vocabulary relevant to diet.
linking of ideas.
Candidate E Examiner comments
Eating habits and its effects
It s very well-known that people, in general, are eating a more unhealthy diet
Content
nowadays than people from their grandparents generation did.
Good a full discussion of topic.
Although everybody realises that they are not eating properly, it seems to be
difficult to change bad eating habits. Perhaps one of the points is that people, Accuracy
who grew up eating improperly, will, probably carry on eating the same kind of Errors mostly due to ambition good overall
control.
food. It is also used to blame the constant rush nowadays as the main
reason for not having a healthy diet.
Range
In spite of all articles, reports and medical advises claiming for the
Good range of vocabulary. Consistent use of
importance of having a healthy diet, most of the people simply ignore the
complex sentences.
effects that bad eating brings to life.
Organisation and cohesion
The basis of a healthy diet are the following: from 4 to 6 portions of fruits and
Good and clear. Good range of linking
vegetables per day, a moderate ingestion of carbohidrates, which are found in
devices.
breads, cereals, pasta, biscuits and potatoes, proteins and vitamins from milk
Appropriacy of register & format
and its derivates as well as meat, being preferably recommended eating fish
Very appropriate, neutral composition style.
and chicken, which are said to be healthier than red meat.
People should accept the fact that we are what we eat and, therefore, select
Target reader
what to eat in order to insure a happier, more enjoyable and longer life. Would be well informed of writer s point of
view.
Marks awarded
Band 4.
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Question 5b (sample script)
Mark scheme and sample script with examiner comments
QUESTION 5B: CANDIDATE F
Content Appropriacy of register & Target reader
" Clear reference to one character " Would be informed about which
format
from the book or short story and character changed most in the
" Neutral composition.
description of how that character opinion of the candidate.
changed in the course of the story. Range
" Language of description, narration
Organisation and cohesion
and opinion.
" Clear development of ideas, with
appropriate linking and
paragraphing.
Candidate F Examiner comments
I have read Wuthering Heights. I have shocked by Heathcliff role. Heathcliff
is an ophan boy, who has braught up by a rich man. In his childhood he Content
grows with Cathy. Cathy is the daugther of the owner of Wuthering Adequate attempt to address task.
Heights (It is a castle).
Accuracy
She is spoilt, beuty and rich girl who falls in Love with Heathcliff. After
Intrusive errors, some of which obscure
Cathy s father died, Heathcliff has to work as a servant, and Cathy chances
communication.
her heart by position, she marries with Linton, who is an aristocratc man.
Range
In my opinion this is the point of chance in Heathcliff. He has been humilled.
Over-ambitious, leading to errors.
Even thaugh he loves Cathy more than anything else, he transforms his live
Organisation and cohesion
in a revenge history against her. He makes everything for getting her love
Satisfactory.
again, he becomes furious, cruel, sad and mad of love.
Consecuently, How can change a person without love!! Heathcliff has been
Appropriacy of register & format
changed by social class differents that existed in the eighteeth century. This
Reasonable composition style.
book is very good written, besides it is without sex, it is full of love and
Target reader
pasion.
Would be distracted by the number of errors.
Marks awarded
Band 2.
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